How to write headlines that make people read your content

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Did that headline get your attention? I hope it did. Writing effective headings is not easy. This one is very much of the “it does what it says on the tin” school — and that’s often no bad thing.

But when your audience is skimming through hundreds of emails, posts, tweets and blogs, how do you write headlines that grab their attention?

Simple can be effective

More often than not, a simple headline will work better than an obscure one. You’re telling the reader in a few words why they should keep reading. But there are many ways to make a simple headline more powerful.

The best approach is to address your audience directly, using “you” and “your” and, if your content is being seen on social media or via email for example, then really talk to your audience as if you are having a one-to-one conversation:

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You can also use questions to show you understand the challenges facing your audience:

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Show that you have the answers

Most of us skim-read online content looking for useful stuff. We all have areas we need help with. So content that provides valuable advice is extremely popular. But again, in a noisy world, how do you make sure your advice is heard Start by demonstrating that you are helping in your heading. “How to” is a tried and tested headline opener:

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Another option is to use “why” to persuade your audience that they need to sit up and take notice:

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But you can make your headings even more compelling by indicating what your advice can actually deliver — results:

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And you can boost interest even further by using your heading to show that your advice will be clear and easy to read:

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Our most popular headline ever at Valuable Content was:

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Nine years on, and between 15 and 30 people a day still read the blog. (You can check it out here if you’re interested.)

Intriguing headlines can fly

Headlines don’t always have to do what they say on the tin. But there’s a world of difference between obscure headings and intriguing ones. One way to create intrigue and tell your story is to use a two-parter heading. Strategic use of a colon or dash can give you the chance to create drama:

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There’s also no harm in being controversial from time to time — six years ago I wrote a blog entitled Bored with content marketing? that got people clicking.

Using real examples is also a good idea:

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It can also be effective to use famous people or events as a hook. But there are two dangers here. Firstly, you don’t want to jump on the same bandwagon as everyone else (people quickly tired of New Year New You type content).

Secondly, don’t promise something you can’t deliver — your content has to live up to the headline. If you cry wolf, people will stop reading your content.

But if you make an interesting connection and see it through, then you can write a heading that will really excite curiosity:

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Think about the context

These days, headlines travel — they don’t just appear on your website or blog, they can be the subject line in your email newsletter, they appear in tweets and they have to work hard in other social media settings such as LinkedIn and Facebook. And what works in one place may not fly in another. A decade ago Dan Zarrella researched which words encouraged retweets and discovered the top words were: you, Twitter, please, retweet, post, blog, social, free, media and help. I’m not sure it will have changed all that much. This research also confirmed that the word “you” is incredibly effective — it’s always a good idea to directly address your audience.

However, email newsletter headlines with the words “free” or “help” in are a massive turn-off. They just shriek spam. So don’t be afraid to tweak your headings and change your approach depending on the context.

Don’t guess — test

There’s no one-size-fits-all answer when it comes to headlines — everyone’s audiences are different. It’s always worth conducting A/B testing with your email newsletters, trying two different headings to see what gets the best response.

You can also test different lengths of heading — although a good benchmark is about 50 to 80 characters, well within the 140-character length of a tweet.

Using keywords in your headlines is sensible — as long as the heading works in its own right and doesn’t come across like a list of words purely aimed at driving SEO.

Above all, notice what works for you. Immerse yourself in your own analytics. See what flies for you and do more of it.

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